Then I had a drink of my tea, calmed down then hit myself with an egg whisk. A defeatist attitude like that will get me nowhere in life.
Sunday, 26 October 2008
More than a few people suggested that I should rewrite the story in third person. At first I was reluctant to even think of undertaking such a momentous task.
Then I read it again and all the flaws just stuck out like a sore thumb. Flaws like, there's no hook at the beginning, the countless typos and first person just doesn't do the story justice.